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At Last by ~Celtic--Spirit:iconCeltic--Spirit:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Open


Today my heart runs fast
My body can't keep along
My soul was left behind
You're out of my sight, at last

I cried for so many hours
Until the tears I could away cast
It was the best I ever did
I'm not near you, at last

For an eternity you were there
All my life you held my hand
All your life you heard my fears
Now you're free of my tears, at last

When I felt sad you cooped with me
When my troubles were too great
You always had an answer
Now you are cheerful, at last

For the first time i do right
I left you in despite
Of my aching heart
For you suffer no more, at last

I set you free like a butterfly
For you to enjoy life and fly
For had i stay more you'd suffer
Only i hurt for my aches, at last

Today my heart runs slow
My body passed it fast
My soul died long ago
You are free of me, at last
©2007-2009 ~Celtic--Spirit
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Author's Comments

a poem written some time ago. 07/02/06.

interpret at will.

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*dragonstar10 Jun 16, 2007, 2:48:44 PM
Beautiful. Sad and lovely. It touched me.

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~Celtic--Spirit Jun 17, 2007, 8:22:14 AM
:love: i'm glad you like it, that was how i felt at the time... and also like a weight on a friend, who i'm glad to say is still my friend, and has been for a dozen years now :D

thank you dear, for your coment it means a lot to me :hug:

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Mood: Love *dragonstar10 Jun 18, 2007, 1:27:16 PM
You are very welcome. :hug: I'm glad you were willing to post this. :blowkiss:

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"If you want to swim with the giant koi, you better be prepared to deal with the Unagi."
I’m Mistress Yugoda in The Unofficial Avatar Crew
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~Celtic--Spirit Jun 18, 2007, 3:01:47 PM
thank you. i am now, but as you can see by the date, it remained stashed way safely for quite some time, it didn't feel right then but it does now, because i've grown more confident in my ability to be a friend and more sure of myself, though my ego and selfesteem are still paper thin by comon standarts it is a 80% improvement on how i was :D

there i go babbleing again:no: i talk too much :giggle:

:rose: to you for being so supportive of me :glomp: thank you

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Mood: Love *dragonstar10 Jun 18, 2007, 11:50:10 PM
I'm glad to hear there has been healing and that you are still friends. :kiss:

You do NOT talk to much! Talking is a good thing! :D

:glomp: Thanks for the rose. You are so sweet.

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~Celtic--Spirit Jun 19, 2007, 4:57:46 AM
:blush: yeah it is and i do compensate :nod: i'm a very good listener :D

your welcome. and you are sweet too :hug:

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