i really like this picture. The color of the lips and eyes especially...The only thing I would do is add more tone to the darker areas. This would make the colors really pop...Other than that, I wouldnt change a thing....nice job..

thank you! you really made my day!

thank you for the concrit! i totally agree, thats something i have to work with, cuse i have the tendency to leave everything very light, i have to get over my fear of pressing the pencil and using higher then a 4B

Again thank you. you rock my socks!!!

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thank you! you really made my day!

thank you for the concrit! i totally agree, thats something i have to work with, cuse i have the tendency to leave everything very light, i have to get over my fear of pressing the pencil and using higher then a 4B

Again thank you. you rock my socks!!!

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The false is most often the truth upside down -- Sigmund Freud

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I really like your style...But just remember not to press too hard into the paper b/c then it will be harder to blend evenly. I would suggest just using a softer pencil, and do a combination of light/semi-light application followed with blending...and so on...It gives a much deeper effect...And also, I ve started using a combination of charcoal and graphite which has really stepped it up. There is an amazing artist, JD Hillberry [link] who uses this technique and he has a few tutorials explaining it. Basically, using the charcoal in areas around the graphite makes the graphite jump off of the page due to its reflective properties...Anyway, I think youve got alot of talent, and the more techniques you have, the better artists youll become...thx again, and hope to see more art from u soon...take care.

this looks very nice! I like that you coloured her lips!

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thank you!

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Very nice. You have a nice style. Keep working on it.

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thank you!! you rock

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You're welcome. And I'm prety sure it's you who rocks.

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